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When the lion loves the lamb by WitchiArt When the lion loves the lamb by WitchiArt
I know again a Twilight drawing. :giggle:

Okay, I finish it, I'm not really happy with it but I guess all I would change would make it more worse. So it's better I let it like it is.
Hope you like it anyway!

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Other Twilight drawings I made:

Bella - Twilight

Edward Cullen



Link to reference photo [link]
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I'll start with the things I especially liked about the drawing:
First, you captured well the likeness of Edward and Bella - especially the former. Also, the faces are highly realistic. My favourite parts are Bella's nose and mouth and Edward's eye and hair. In the skin, the bright lines add to the realistic feeling - especially in Bella's face.
The higher side of Bella's hair also looks really good, especially thanks to the difference in brightness from the dark background.

Now about what could have been changed a little in my opinion:
The background would have looked better and contrasted with their faces were it darker - maybe even close to black, and smoother.
Bella's hair could have looked more realistic with more light and darkness contrast - parts of lighted locks and darker shadows instead of dark lines that may give a feeling of hair, but look a little less real. Another small part is Bella's jacket which is a little plain. More details of shadow like on Edward's jacket, and blending the pencil strokes could have given it a more realistic look.

About the originality of the picture, it seems that many artists have used this reference photo, which makes it less special from this aspect, but from the technical point of view (which I tend to value much more) this is a very good drawing!
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:iconluvindrawin:
luvindrawin Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2009
Great job!
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:iconchanel1oo:
chanel1oo Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009
your beautiful drawing is featured here [link] :hug:
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:iconluvyaxxx13:
luvyaxxx13 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2009
Lol thank you :) x
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:iconwitchiart:
WitchiArt Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You shouldn't be unmotivated! I need a lot of patient and practice to draw such a picture and I'm still not really happy with it.
So just try and you'll learn with every drawing! :hug:
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:iconluvyaxxx13:
luvyaxxx13 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2009
Ah Shit .... Ive just started drawing this shot , now ive seen this im totally de motivated lol - mine will never be anywhere near that standard ...lol x

Its fantastic x
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:iconwitchiart:
WitchiArt Featured By Owner May 30, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks :heart:
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:iconwitchiart:
WitchiArt Featured By Owner May 30, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks :heart:
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:iconwitchiart:
WitchiArt Featured By Owner May 30, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks :heart:
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:iconstanstan009:
stanstan009 Featured By Owner May 18, 2009
ive seen this done a few times, but NEVER like this! :dance:
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:iconenglishlullaby:
EnglishLullaby Featured By Owner May 15, 2009
AWESOME! :heart:
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:iconmupuciite:
mupuciite Featured By Owner May 13, 2009
i drew this picture too but it's not so great as yours :( if you want, you can check it :D you have a great talent ;)
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:iconnjau:
Njau Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Good job :D
It looks so alive, I'm impressed! ^^
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:iconconfuzed89:
confuzed89 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009
Beautiful! =)
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:iconandrew555:
Andrew555 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2009
If I may ask, does Bella have an earphone in? Oh wait, it's in the reference picture. I just consider it a poor choice for depicting the emotion intended to be conveyed in the shot.
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:iconberquinn:
berquinn Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Absolutely amazing. It's so well rendered that it looks like a greyscale photo. I love it!!
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:iconjulie1226:
Julie1226 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009
you're welcome :)
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:iconpadfootness:
padfootness Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009
This is so incredibly, incredibly good. Love the moment and all the tiny details and the hair :wow:
Also, doesn't Edward look like Elvis at this angle? Haha, I was listening to All Shook Up the whole time I looked this picture :D
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:iconwitchiart:
WitchiArt Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you :hug:
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:iconjulie1226:
Julie1226 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009
You are featured in my new journal [link]
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:iconpucky-chan:
Pucky-Chan Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful!
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:iconananasappelsiini:
ananasappelsiini Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2009
simply amazing ^^ love it ^^
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:iconinspired-to-live:
Inspired-to-Live Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2009
This is amazing! The detail in their hair, clothing, facial expressions...EVERYTHING!

:+fav:! :D
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:iconohgod--theaftermath:
ohgod--theaftermath Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009
Absolutely stunning, you have obvious skill.
:+favlove:
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:iconmindfreakangel:
mindfreakangel Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2009
oh wow this is beautiful! i love the detail you put in here, especially the emotion and shading. outstanding!

this is my fave scene frm the movie and i was actually drawing this scene on microsoft paint. i can show u it when im done, if youd like.
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SuzanneHole Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2009
Amazing pencilwork! lovely contrast of shades
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:iconnefarous:
Nefarous Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2009
Wow wow! You did an amazing job!!!! Its really....perfect!
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:iconboostergirl18111:
Boostergirl18111 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Awsome! :D
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:iconwitchiart:
WitchiArt Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you :heart:
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:iconwitchiart:
WitchiArt Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you :heart:
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WitchiArt Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I want to make a tutorial how I shade my drawings, maybe it'll help.
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BlondInsideMe Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2009
Will you teach me to draw like this I'm having trouble with shading
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AnimeFan526 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2009
np! :hug:
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:iconmrwolph:
MrWolph Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2009
Skimming around when I noticed 'Favourites & Collections: 1,500'
Congrats. :)
The soft lighting on the clothing and skin along with the darker, more detailed hair makes it pleasing to the eye. ;)
I'll definalty will be skimming around your gallery more, your traditional is amazing.
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bleedingblack94 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
isnt that what twilight is?
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:iconsofiiabiiss:
sofiiabiiss Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
two things that i love in this picture.
twilight and drawing :)


good job!
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:iconunordinalwhimsey:
unordinalwhimsey Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
haha, my chin isn't very pretty... from the side its awful, lol... I guess we are both stuck with baby cheeks for life, haha... at least the people you draw seem to have rather square jaw lines :D
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:iconwitchiart:
WitchiArt Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:giggle:

That's good, I don't like that angle of myself too. =P
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:iconunordinalwhimsey:
unordinalwhimsey Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't think you can make a person more flattering than they are... I think that's his problem, not your fault :D I don't like that angle of myself either, lol
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:iconwitchiart:
WitchiArt Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I don't like how Edward turned out, I want to make it better, but I wasn't able to do.
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:iconwitchiart:
WitchiArt Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh I don't read often romance novels.
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:iconbleedingblack94:
bleedingblack94 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2009
o. he is a romance writer
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:iconunordinalwhimsey:
unordinalwhimsey Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
YOU TOTALLY CAUGHT THE MOMENT!!! I'd like to know why you aren't happy with it, I don't see anything wrong! :hug:
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:iconwitchiart:
WitchiArt Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much, I'm happy you love my work :heart:
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Snow-White-Princess Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2009
this is amazing! :) well done! :) i love your work! :)
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:iconfutszak:
futszak Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2009   Traditional Artist
u welcome its a awesome work:D
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:iconwitchiart:
WitchiArt Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much :heart:
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somechick49 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
wow...amazing. well done
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:iconwitchiart:
WitchiArt Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Okay, I let you know :D
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:iconwitchiart:
WitchiArt Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No I don't read the novels by Nicolas Sparks. Never heard his name so far.
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:iconwitchiart:
WitchiArt Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much :heart:
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